My book review

We were reading about Miri & Raru which Raru is just a drawing made by Miri and we were learning about the story and it is called Miri & Raru and it was fun reading the book.We were also learning about making comics and my comic was basically inspired by the comic so they kinda look like the same but different at the same time. It was easy to give you some of my feed back even though it was hard to think about the stuff I still got it eventually.I also found it easy to make another slide because if I type to much words it just ends up going off the slide so I would need to make another slide but it was easy. It was hard to know what I was going to write about in my book review so it took me a long time to think what I want to write down so I would take breaks so I can think about what I would want to write in my book review.  In the future I would put some descriptive language in my writing  so you guys know about what I'm actually writing about and you can understand what I am writing down.And next time I would change some og my words so you could understand some of it.

What do you think I should do next time I do one of these.