Thursday, June 10, 2021

Should we be prepared for a natural disaster when it happens?

  • I was learning about...persuasive writing and earthquakes and how they are made so we can put it in are persuasive writing to see if you agree or disagree what we talked about in our writing.I disagree about why should we be prepared for a natural disaster,because it could happen at anytime and any day. 
  • I found it easy to...copy and past my words so I can put it in my slide so I can post it on my blog so you can read it and comment in the comment section so you can tell me what you disliked and what you liked so I can read it.
  •  I found it hard to...find mistakes in my writing because I didn't cheek it properly in my writing so I hade to fix it up so my writing can make sense when you read it.It was also hard writing my words down and then putting it in the slide because when I started my sentence and I had a plan I still didn't know what to write down on my draft copy to put it on my slide. 
  • Next time I will...have more description in my writing so when you read it you can see if you disagree or agree with my answer in my persuasive writing about natural disaster. And I will also try harder in my persuasive  because it didn't look so good when I didn't fix but when I fixed it it looked better.  

My book review

  • I was learning about...how to post to my blog to show you my work.We were also learning about how the rena crashed and what happened to our marine life when that happened.
  • I found it easy to...colour in the stars and tell you what I thought about the book and read the book to find the words and remember the words.
  • I found it hard to...explaining my words and describing it to you guys in a full sentence so you can read it.
  • I really enjoyed...reading the book and finding out new words from the book and putting them in a full sentence so you can read it and telling you what happened in the book and how it happened in the book.
  •  Next time I will...have a better  image when I write it down and not just write it down and then it doesn't make sense so I have to write it down again so it can make more sense when you read it and kinda see an image in your head to see how and what happened in the story to make sense.  

Wednesday, June 9, 2021

My follow up questions

  • I was learning about...how the rena crash and all the oil went in the sea which killed the marine life.It was telling us that we should keep the ocean safe and not kill.
  • I found it easy to...read the book and found out what happened to the rena and our marine life and the birds.And it was easy to write it down because it was easy to remember the birds and what happened to our marine life and our birds.
  •   I found it hard to...explaining my words and finding the definition of the words because we had to look in a dictionary which was hard to find the words.Explaining my words is hard because you can't really explain it well enough.
  • I really enjoyed...reading the book because I didn't know about the rena until I read the book which surprised me how much of our marine life died and what happened to the rena. This is a great book to read.
  • Next time I will... describe my words properly when I write them down when I remember the words from the book.I have to give a great description of the book.