Thursday, June 10, 2021

Should we be prepared for a natural disaster when it happens?

  • I was learning about...persuasive writing and earthquakes and how they are made so we can put it in are persuasive writing to see if you agree or disagree what we talked about in our writing.I disagree about why should we be prepared for a natural disaster,because it could happen at anytime and any day. 
  • I found it easy to...copy and past my words so I can put it in my slide so I can post it on my blog so you can read it and comment in the comment section so you can tell me what you disliked and what you liked so I can read it.
  •  I found it hard to...find mistakes in my writing because I didn't cheek it properly in my writing so I hade to fix it up so my writing can make sense when you read it.It was also hard writing my words down and then putting it in the slide because when I started my sentence and I had a plan I still didn't know what to write down on my draft copy to put it on my slide. 
  • Next time I will...have more description in my writing so when you read it you can see if you disagree or agree with my answer in my persuasive writing about natural disaster. And I will also try harder in my persuasive  because it didn't look so good when I didn't fix but when I fixed it it looked better.  

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